Vocabulary; Skill- Showing not Telling

28 Sep

Two New Vocabulary Words

Define the following words, write a sentence for each, and think of something/someone that could be described with the word.

12th Grade: Ambiguous (adj) – unclear, hard to determine
Nefarious (adj) – wicked, evil; criminal

9th Grade: Ostentatious (adj) – overly showy, trying to impress
Expedient (adj) – quick, effective

Skill: Showing not Telling-

-instead of telling us something, show us!


Telling: Roger is mean.

Showing: Roger tripped me in the hallway. At lunch, in between harassing freshmen, he was throwing french fries at our table.

Telling: The girls were excited.

Showing: Giggles and screams filled the arena. The soft curls were now damp with perspiration and the anticipation of the event. They held tight to each other in a mock effort to contain themselves. Arms flailed upward, and voices echoed in varying tones. The moment was here.

Telling: The room was vacant.

Showing: The door opened with a resounding echo that seemed to fill the house. Cob webs once attached flowed freely in the air as the open door brought light to a well worn floor. The light gave notice to the peeling paint on the walls and to the silhouettes once covered by pictures. The new air gave life to a stuffiness that entrapped the room. Faded and torn white sheets covered once new furniture now drowning in dust.

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